Thursday, 13 October 2016

My Mum

This is the awesomest person I know. Her eyes sparkle like the blue sky, her hair hangs down like a lazy sloth. Her cheeks are so rosy that it looks like thick blood. Her two front adult teeth look like bunny teeth, she looks casual and fit probably because she does lots of running and riding horses. She walks briskly. She loves cooking and driving around.

 Every morning she asks me what do I want for breakfast. She is also always there for me. She loves telling me jokes. She's always loud. She always feels confident.

How she affects me is by rushing me every time she's late for something. Also she rushes me when I’m being really slow. She always takes away my privileges when I fight with my brother.This person is my mum.
By Lebron.
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8 comments:

  1. Unknown17 October 2016 at 18:43

    This is awesome expressive writing.

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  2. DaveAutotronics17 October 2016 at 19:00

    Very cool Lebron!! Haley :)

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  3. Unknown17 October 2016 at 20:19

    Awesome Lebron well done

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  4. Traceme18 October 2016 at 02:13

    What a brilliant read! Lebron, I love the way you described your parents. Your Mum sure is a special person XX

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  5. Traceme18 October 2016 at 02:14

    Lebron, this is such a good read. I love the way you expressed your parents, and agree your Mum sure is special!

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  6. Anonymous19 October 2016 at 00:58

    thanks

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  7. Unknown24 October 2016 at 16:26

    Thanks Lebron I LOVE this. xxx mum

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  8. Unknown24 October 2016 at 16:27

    Thanks Lebron I LOVE this. xxx Mum

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